Comments : Memories

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Very sad ending .

    I think you spelled something wrong or did you mean to ?

    But you left me hear..wishing for my death

    it should be here instead of the hear like you hear the car coming ....

    -anyways-
    your poem was good and it had a nice flow and i really liked it you should keep it up .I give it a 5/5