Alright. i love this and its very cute.. i PERSONALLY, dont liek the rhyme scheem. like its good other than that.. but i dont think it flows.. but its very good creative and lovely. i love it 5/5

I love this poem it expressed everthing you felt while writing it and you made the reader feel it as well great job!!!5/5

laura

I loved this poem, I thought it was original and a totally new & refreshing way to write poetry. 5/5 dearest!! =)

Form of this poem is interesting and unique. This poem looks real. I like the atmosphere that you created in this peace. Greatly written peace, it deserves 5/5. You described emotions very well.
(I read many sad poems in last time and I can say this is one of best.)

This is very good peom. It has alot of feeling in it!! keep Writing cuz ur good at it 4/5

now may u please do "Now its ur turn"

This was very good!!!You have described your emotions very well!!It was really unique from others!!Good job in this piece!!
All the best
And take care.

Greatly written poem, I like the form and the choice of words in it. Every line is excellently written. You put a lot of emotions in this piece.
Well done, 5/5 from me

I think it was a great poem. I really love to read different types of poetry :) Flow was smooth, well done

5/5

That was so sweet, I loved the flow, and each line had meaning. 5/5

Wow. it was sweet, and nicely penned. i like this one better, i like long poems, and the way your wording is, is just beautiful.superb writing, 5/5

I always like triolets..if you know what words to put to the repetition line..it really gets effective..and you did it well that it made the poem meaningful as can be

Keep it up,
Laura

I really LOVED this poem! Wow what a great job. amzing! keep it up
--Viola

Once again, beautifully written. amazing. you have a way with putting the perfect words together and making it into something beautiful. great job. i love it. and thank you for the comment.

Good Poem. I like triolets but I don't really do them 'cause I thought it'd be too hard. I really like yours though. It was wonderfully written and the flow was amazing.
5/5

-Shannon <3

Triolets one of the most simple and beautiful pieces of poetry, one of my favorites. I think you pulled this one off quite well, althugh this is different from the usual Triolet I read they always seem to be alot faster in a syllable count.. still you pulled this off quite nicely. Well done on creating a great read. ~mel

Excellent poem I love triolets, they're my favorite. Check out mine when you got time. Great work, keep it up.

A good strong poem
i am impressed

That was penned so beautifully, and was alot better than my triolet, And it was just amazing to read, I really enjoyed it...

5/5

Emotions flowed through it so well you made it a very well and organized poem!

I loved this as well when I read it for the contest, it was in the placings at first and would be if I had three HM`s, but it was really tough. These are questions I`m sure every girls asks herself at one point in a relationship, I know I have...so it is very easy to relate to this for a lot of the readers, even some guy readers; and that is a good thing to be able to find in a poem.

"If I'm not in love with you, why am I still fooling myself?
How did we last for so long, how could I be so blind?
Every time we meet, these questions are in my mind --"

^^ LOVED those lines.

5.5
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