Music

by nobody truly knows me   Jul 6, 2007


Pick up the instrument...
take a deep breath.
let the music fill you...
play until death.

fade away from the world...
let the music carry you in.
forget about all else...
let the adventure begin.

travel with music leading the way...
arrive somewhere unknown.
don't dwell in the places of the past...
find solitude in your time alone.

fly away from all heartbreak...
on wings made of sound.
let the music heal your wounds...
forget the pain to which your bound.

open up your mind...
rejoice and free your soul.
shake off the shadows of your past...
let the music make you whole.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Pick up the instrument...
    take a deep breath.
    let the music fill you...
    play until death.
    ---i was drawn in by this opening great choice of words

    fade away from the world...
    let the music carry you in.
    forget about all else...
    let the adventure begin.
    ---i love how you worded this i feel just that way when i start listening to music it helps me relax

    travel with music leading the way...
    arrive somewhere unknown.
    don't dwell in the places of the past...
    find solitude in your time alone.
    --this makes the music seem like a get away from this busy world

    fly away from all heartbreak...
    on wings made of sound.
    let the music heal your wounds...
    forget the pain to which your bound.
    --ah i agree with this music can relate to anything you have been going through and helps make the bad go away

    open up your mind...
    rejoice and free your soul.
    shake off the shadows of your past...
    let the music make you whole.
    ---great ending!
    5/5<33

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    I love how you explained how it feels when you get into something you love so much like playing an instrument or dancing etc....i play the violin and i play just to forget and to be consume by music such a beautiful poem! 5/5xxxxxxxxx

  • This is amazing...

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    Very nice. love this poem. kudos

  • 16 years ago

    by viraz vitalia

    I love your writing your flow is superiorissimo(get it) you have to help me with flow sometime