Comments : Are You Proud of Me Yet (In Your Eyes)

  • 17 years ago

    by Anna

    I really loved this. It flows great and there is a lot of emotion in it.

    "(cause in your eyes)
    im a sinner, not a winner
    (cause in your eyes)
    im a waste of a life
    (cause in your eyes)
    i see that you want more
    (cause in your eyes)
    well, i cant do this anymore~~"

    I really liked that. Nice work. Keep writing...