by L0VED Jul 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When you like someone |
by Darlena
This poem was ok. It was a actually a bit confusing because the metaphores and phrases (if u will) didnt go great at all with the poem. But keep up the great work. |
by Debbie
Although this work particularly isn't my cup of tea, its concluding lines gave me a smile. How its ambiance transitioned from being sober to something vibrantly hopeful is rather cute. Thanks for sharing. |
by K3LSI3
Good poem.I can really relate to it.I liked how you compared love to monopoly.Great job. |