Good poem.I can really relate to it.I liked how you compared love to monopoly.Great job.
Kelsie

Although this work particularly isn't my cup of tea, its concluding lines gave me a smile. How its ambiance transitioned from being sober to something vibrantly hopeful is rather cute. Thanks for sharing.

`Marian

This poem was ok. It was a actually a bit confusing because the metaphores and phrases (if u will) didnt go great at all with the poem. But keep up the great work.

Feel free to cum and check out my poems whenever u get the chance. thanx.