by Beyond Repair Jul 7, 2007
category :
Internet slang /
sadness
My heart skips a beat, I lay dead at your feet, only you can save me |
by ali
This is a really great piece, the emotion is so real and it was so easy for me to feel and relate to. this is soo meant to be a song by the way!!! |
by ILoveRobbie
I liked this poem out of all of them. It is really descriptive and has alot of emotions. Really good! ~Neely~ |
by ILoveRobbie
I liked this poem out of all of them. It is really descriptive and has alot of emotions. Really good! ~Neely~ |
by ILoveRobbie
I liked this poem out of all of them. It is really descriptive and has alot of emotions. Really good! ~Neely~ |
by Spirit
These verses woul completly make awesome lyrics. i really like it, it was so full of emotion that i could feel it. anyway good luck with future poems and make sure that they all have some type of message. like this |