by Beyond Repair Jul 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You burned out the darkness, and turned off lights |
by ali
This is really good, these guys are right it does sound like it has the makings of a really good song, you should try making it a song |
by sara
I think this could make a great song or poem too great work |
by Ducky Ramone
This sounds like it could be a song. good job! :) |