Comments : Tell me the Answer

  • 17 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    This sounds like it could be a song. good job! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    I think this could make a great song or poem too great work

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    This is really good, these guys are right it does sound like it has the makings of a really good song, you should try making it a song
    i love the use of repetition and the raw emotion which is so strong
    really good 5/5
    i like your style of writing