-"We can conquer the world--
just you and I."
I said it with such passion,
because I was blinded to my lie.-
^My favorite stanza.
Great love poem, I really enjoyed it.
Flow is very good.
5/5 from me

I loved this poem :) especially the little twist that it had at the end. The title is very creative as well which is always good. glad to see your still writing and still on here!
~jacob