by christina Jul 7, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I did not want are friendship to end like that |
by ECILA ice
Oh ok this is a good poem.. i like how u frankly unleashed your emotions and point of view.. but on the other hadn, this poem need some more punctuations, cutting of words, and some spelling errors.. sorry for my frankness. |
It is easy to see the emotions and feelings in this poem...great friendship poem. Keep up the good work - wonderful job! |
by oddi tea
I like the sincerity of this poem. It is heart-warming and a great friend poem. Keep writing. May God bless |