Hey I really like your poem, its so simple
but its how alot of people feel, including me, and i love the flow of it. Keep it up.
<3 Breann

Till the eighth line, it's so sad. But why there is sha lalala.. Hahahaa.. Nice poem. Strong emotion too.. :)

Take the last two lines off and itsa a wesome poem even with it you get my 5
the last two lines sound like u were saying

blah blah blah and that takes away from
this beautiful poem.

It's short and simple, but it gets the point across. It's awesome that you can get all that emotion in few lines :)