by Lexie Jul 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I gave you everything I had, |
by Niki
I love this poem! Keep it up. I could feel the heartache in it. Keep it up and keep the emotions in!!!!!!!! |
I really like this poem but i was a bit stuck on the last stanza. i feel as if the last line should rhyme with the second line as the first and third line do. something like |