I really like this poem but i was a bit stuck on the last stanza. i feel as if the last line should rhyme with the second line as the first and third line do. something like

I'd hate to say it,
Believe me I do,
I hate to say it,
But i did tell you

i dunno i just feel that it is almost there but not quite. but good work

xoxo

I love this poem! Keep it up. I could feel the heartache in it. Keep it up and keep the emotions in!!!!!!!!