Jeannie
What a wonderful write. How true your words are. He is the one who holds us whenn we think we are alone. Excellent imagery :)

An inner peace will come to be
His love will stay my fall
A faint reminder from the one
Who loves me most of all.

I love this stanza. What a wonderful message you have delivered.
Love Cindy

Inside my heart there is a hole
That traps me like a vice
A sounding board is what I need
To make things turn out right.

^^ Jeannie, this right here is amazing..when we have those holes in our hearts thats where the Lord is...working on ways to mend it and bless you.....Very faithful piece from you! I love poems like these because they give me hope that there are still people who believe in God when things get rough!
Loved this!
Chelsey

This poem was alright. i didn't like it all that much though. i think you have a few words that could be diffrent but i still think that it was a good poem.

Never a truer word spoken.. Maybe He is the only one who knows how to love us.. Well done, as always. xx