A Strong Goodbye

by James   Jul 7, 2007


The door slams
Rain Pours
Girl cries about her lovers goodbye
Sits there calm
Sits there still
Brave on her Face
Tears in her Eyes
One tear seeps through
It does not last
She holds her strength
Again and again
Countries apart
Lovers apart
Bonds that will heal the broken heart
As strong as steel
As great as iron
The girl is a mirror
In which she looks
One side Sad
The other blue
No matter which side she has
There she is standing through and through

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Another well written piece. I would suggest developing an ability to use the correct words such as "steal" which should have been "steel". One is a substance and the other an act.

  • 17 years ago

    by shannonn

    Awesome poem james :) smile

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n H34rted

    I love it and i can relate!!! excellent work!!!!

    :) xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Hey i liek your poem its good keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Brave on her Face
    Tears in her Eyes

    The girl is a mirror
    In which she looks
    One side Sad
    The other blue

    excellent

    5 for it

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