by Erica Jul 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Lost outside in midnight rain |
by Common Sense
What is a yellow light. |
Yes i agree with the other commenter the imagery was wonderful made me feel like i was there. i really liked the last stanza. well done |
Wonderful! the imagery in this one was awesome and i loved the scene you conveyed. keep up the excellent work! (im not kidding, write more!) -Kiera |