Comments : How it ends

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW great poem ,full of deep feelings very good and the end you pulled it off very well, good job , keep it up , your friend Tracy d

  • 17 years ago

    by more den just a broken smile

    Dat is deadly i reali like dat poem ur reali good

  • 17 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Great feelings.
    Real Deep.
    Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow powerful words
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 17 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    This poem is like a biography on my feelings this one is incredible 5/5