My heart

by LiNa   Jul 7, 2007


The road to my heart
leads nowhere
only down a path of misery
my soul is broken
and my heart is turning black
my heart has always told my story
so here's how it begins(2x)

It all began with his words
it all began with his touch
the way his voice could control me
and make me feel overtaken
but now I'm just broken

I'm getting frustrated
and now my eyes are pouring out tears
i swore I'd never cry
but i guess it's my own fault
I'm being overtaken
by this inner me

all the hatred
all the pain
I've ever felt in my life
overwhelms me
now I'm crying out to you
take me away

it all began with his words
it all began with his touch
the way his voice could control me
and make me feel overtaken
but now I'm just broken

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  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Im a little confused

    i think you need to explain about what he did more

    i like the line i swore I'd never cry
    but i guess it's my own fault

    so how i feel often

  • 16 years ago

    by with this small heart i give u all

    Ahh this made me cry reall nice is it a song?..i write my own sonqs hope to become a sinqer someday i loved this so much

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem ,sad but very well written . it was very touching and moved me , especially these lines ::::::
    all the hatred
    all the pain
    I've ever felt in my life
    overwhelms me
    now I'm crying out to you
    take me away
    Wonderful job , keep it up ,,, your friend Tracy d ,,,,,,5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Incredible 5/5 this poem is just... im at loss for words i love the feeling keep it up your on a role

  • 17 years ago

    by Ryan

    THIS IS GOOD!
    ima give it a 5 :]
    and I also am gonna read some other poems by you...
    xoxoxo..
    Ryan

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