I don't like wording and ending, but rest is good. This is not classic love poem which is great. You expressed emotions very well and this one deserves 5/5.(but others of your poems that I read are even more better)

Its not the best flow. But it is a very good poem for beginers. Better than most of my begining poems I can tell you that hun.

Keep writing.

Always and forever

[Deathly'Amore]

I like this...but in the first line you should fix the "no" to now...I think you missed that..but other than that it's great really good poem

I really loved this poem a lot, mostly because i could relate to it. you're amazing, keep writing. <3

Excellent
a very practical situation many lovers go through
keep it up
really awesome poetry
5/5
your new friend
Rohan

Will you read my love poems plz?or any other poems
tc

Hey dats a very very good poem wel written

Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..

Nazeer

Sad. But I love it... Very well written.
Can relate to feelings. 5/5
-Jackie

This reminds me of Ricky.
He lives in Tennessee. :'[
Great Poem.

Wow. it has so much meaning. i like it a whole lot. :D

God. this is SWEET!

I really love this poem, its exactly how i feel sometimes! thanks for the comment on my poem!
Keep it up, you have a talent:)

I like this poem, i feel like i can relate, it's sad but its true,

I know how u feel sometimes i feel the same way but people seem to think i dont have emotions cuz in person i really dont show that i feel any pain u kno

AWWWWW! T3ARz*
i L0V3 iT =]

Nice i love ur poem keep on good work

Excellent!!!

It was beautiful...!!!!

Veryy well written

Best choices of words

:D

5/5

I will comment more like tomorrow ot something because i am not writing good comments right now lol

This is probably my favorite poem because I can relate to every single line. Its just amazing how this poem is exactly how I feel lately.
I Love It!
Your Amazing =]

You Have Explained Things That I Have Been Through Using The Most Simple Words And Sentences
Really Good :) x

I can so relate to this... good work