Comments : Title...ummm no clue... and ideas?

  • 17 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Hmm possible titles:

    "If only he knew"

    "If only he would realise"

    "I wish i could but i can't"

    lol i dunno

    um the last two lines of the last stanza need a bit of work but apart from that everything else is good

    xoxo