Wow, it was such a deep and meaningful poem, you could tell it came straight from the heart.
i loved it, 5/5
I feel myself grow weary, I begin to stray
Who are you to tell me it will be OK
This life style is more than I can take
I can't forgive myself for this mistake

my fave lines

Loved the ending! excellent work, you have greatly inproved your writing ability. well done.

5/5 David

Wow this was a simple piece but consist of one great picture and vivid emotions.. the chosen words just put one deep menaing beyond each lines and shows one great piece.. keep up the good work