Wow two sides of love in a hilarious way expressed. Thanks for the comment on mine. You have nicely written it with the fun element. Well deserved 5/5 dear

I guess it was your first sonnetic fsams..but it's unbelieveable that you did it so professional

I especially liked that repetitive lines;

Never love and live in a garden
If you cant carry the burden

So meaningful
Good job,
Laura

Fsams
This is really a funny piece.

And if you do it without condom
You will lose all your freedom

I really started laughing with these lines....LMAO.....how true :)
Take Care Cindy

Great poem. I have not read a poem like this before it is your style i think. Plse chk out my poem. Your poem is really nice. Tc

This poem was fairly amusing and delightful to read, indeed; plus, seeing a humorous piece written in a poetic form was uncommon these days. Additional props for that. :) Thanks for giving me a chuckle!

Love,
Debbie

Wow. it was nicely written, i am still laughing from it, lol. i didn't use a condom and i lost all my freedom to my 7 month old. it was nicely written and it was a pleasure to r/r/c this for you, 5/5 easy

That's good
i don't know y it is in the funny genre but ok

I liked this one, it kind of held a message, but at the same time being quite funny and light about it.
a good poem
well done
love Tara-Kay
x

Nice job.. the flow was good as well as the word choice.. the whole idea wasnt that intruiging to me so its probably a 4/5

You've captured a lot of truth in this piece, love the metaphor and deeper meaning within this poem. Very well written.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Lol. I liked it.
It had good meaning to it, and was kinda cute.
but, i didn't like the condom part.
it kinda didn't fit the rest. well it did, but it didn't lol.

if that makes sense.

A very nice work! =)

This one made me giggle. lol 5/5

Another good one. this one holds truth in it, pure un sugar coated truth....beaneath beautiful words of coures antother 5/5 and please never stop writing.

It was funny, and was meaningful.

Keep it up!
5/5

~Quiet One

Hehe, some parts made me laugh :D. The flow was great, and your choice of words complemented your own unique style :D!! I don't really know what else to say for this poem, except for keep it up, and 5/5

Witha ll due respect,
Hatori
The Dreamer

P.S. Thanks for the RRc on "Shalua and Skelke (ballade)"

Another good poem! Flow was smooth, I like your choice of words, I also like the way you rhymed some lines, good job

Never thought about it like that?
really opened my eyes.
5/5

I like your writing style. it's really good. and the poem was amazing. you did such a wonderful job writing it.

~Kristina

Oh I love this poem... very good job!! You are extremely talented! 5/5!!