I liked it but not as much as the other 2 but still good , this time 4/5

Funny poem.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Aww i liked this poem, it portrayed two sides of love, and was written very well with a good flow! deffinatly a 5/5

xXx

This was an enjoyable piece to read. It's simple, but still unique in a way... this was greatly penned, it flowed well and the wording was exquisite. Great work!

5/5

Haha cute very good and different 5/5

Love it

Hey this one was great!!! keep it up

Lol um...okay. interesting enough.

Its interesting.. i dont think ive seen this style before but i like it... especially the last stanza. keep it up <3

Wow that was great

I liked this. Denotes a special kind of wisdom few young adults realize. I'm glad you shared it with the site. Keep up the good work.

Interesting, though not funny.
I liked the topic you portrayed, though I didn't get much out of it.

xTheEcstaysofSuicidex 3.5

It wasn't really funny to me.
But nonetheless it was an excellent poem.
You did a good job, and truth rang from each word.
Actually to me, I thought it was more serious, haha I guess Im weird.

Another 5/5 From me,as you rightly deserve it.:)
Elaine.

Aww, that'S a sweetT poeM! I likE iT :)

luzaN

Cute poem once again, not much emotion but cute.

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

Heh, was pretty funny, you're really talented at writing, well written and flow was spot on.

5/5 Well done :)

This is great.
nice way of explaining what love is and what can happen if you're not careful.
5/5

You are such a good writer. I adore your
style. I really enjoyed this piece. Continue your writing. I give this a 5/5!!

Very well written, with an interesting message. i had to read it twice!! nice work!