I liked the rhyming, pacing, and format. i also liked how you fit certain words in there such as ambience and dare i say condom. good work, well written

your servant:
atticus

A really well structured and well rhymed poem. Never seemed anything like it, don't have any bad comments. Just keep it up :) 5/5

I really don't agree with the message, but other then that I can't see anything wrong with the poem it was heart felt followed through with a clear message and kept the reader I wanting to read on so I gave it a 5. Plot121

Haha! This was a great poem. Great use of words and it has a great affect. Nice work :)

Ally. x

I understand what you mean,
Love can be a burden...
It's interesting how you compared it with a garden.

I say you really wrote a Great poem, and also made sure you proved your point ;)
5/5