Ben
What a sad piece you have penned. The emotion in this ust reaches out and grips my heart. I can relate to so much to your words.

Light lying undiscovered beneath blight's pain unseen.
Life wracked by nightmares, torn apart are my dreams.

These lines bring tears to my eyes. I know things will get better for you.
Love you

Very dark and troubled write....I can feel the subject's pain and sympathize with the struggle.....good rhyme and excellent word choices....5/5 All the best, Debbie