The Killer

by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror   Jul 7, 2007


Open season,
let's hunt down all angels...

I am
the killer.

I'm Lucifer's son,
my father, himself
gave me the gun.

The sky is blackened
as I am setting a trap,
the rain starts falling,
as I'm waiting in the gap.

I am
the killer.

She's coming down the moons ray
An angel, coming down on Earth to pray
So I'm pulling trigger, taking her life away.

I am
the killer.

Open season,
let's hunt down all angels.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    The structure and the rhyme where both very well. I'm not usually into dark poems, but it was well written. Keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very interesting....... nicely expressed.... well done...

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I was scared a bit, but u still encourage me to finish the poem... amazing u did a nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Lol, A little scary infact. But I liked you nice and easy choice of words, it really did it for me. great poem, although I thought it could have been better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    I agree with Mooie Ogen. Totally different from anything else. Loved the repitition and word choice. You are a very talented dark poem writer. Keep it up. 5/5
    ~ Lainey

Read All Comments (12)

More Poems By DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror