I read this out loud and even though normally i don't get into this type of poems, this one just.. trapped me lol! it's very touching, i really like it. nd i can relate. like u said about my poem i guess we're going through the same eh? :P
the words are really good, there were just some typos to correct:
as she try (tried/tries)to pick up the peaces(pieces) of a broken love,
they all said (it) wasn't meant to be,
good one though. oh and my fav part was the line saying who were they to say it wasnt meant to be. just great :)
best wishes, take care
-azi