by Corinne
I'm very fond of dandelions too :-) |
by Melissa
Now this is the perfect haiku! I LOVE IT! Very rarely am I captured by a haiku, but I am captivated by this one. AWESOME! ;o) |
by Fsams
Very creative piece of poetry. Haiku is a unique type and you have added so much meaning in it with the very precise words. Tc |
by Debbie
Such well-designed and graceful beauty emanated by your words have thoroughly enchanted me. In all truth, prior to the appearance of this lovely piece, I never have truly enjoyed Haiku's. It's amazing to note how someone remarkable as you still adores simple pleasures in life. |
by BlueDreams
Creative penned! Dear, there are nothing to say here.... simply yet perfect written! Hugs....Bert. |
by Verity Han
Not only have you gotten the number of syllables correct (amazing compared to my classmates...) but you get your point across easily. Keep it up, keep it up! |
by Nix
Wow, it is really beautiful, short but so powerful. Well done! I love this one, wonderful atmosphere. |