Great poem ,very sad , but well written and full of heartfelt feelings and emotions , wonderful job, ,,,, your friend Tracy d......5/5

I really relate to the last line....I liked it a lot...one suggestion though...a little more unique imagery, metaphor etc. would make this poem not look cliche....just my two cents :) and I admire how you've fitted it into a form...I can NEVER do that..lol

I remember this from the contest nice poem 5/5

It was very emotion packed. I really loved it. I like the form too. Very well done! Keep it up.

~Mo~

Your poet heart speaks well. I really liked your poem and the way it flowed with words chosen for just the right moment as your poem began to speak of that heart. Keep up the good works….I’ll be reading more…

Excellent imagry and well formed I loved this poem although I fear it has left me sad for the rest of the day, which is really a good thing. I always maintain that the really good poetry is the poetry that awakens emotions in us and yours certainly did that well done and thank you for the great read.
Tim