O, golly that is a really good poem. that just plain tears at your heart to read. excellent job on this! keep it up!

~Chelsea

I didn't fully understand the last stanza. I was hoping you could explain it. But other than that, I really liked the poem. It was very well put and had good flow and rhyme without sounding forced.
*ME*

I dont get the end

So help me

bc i really like it but i got confused