Omg I loved this poem. I'm gay but I still loved this poem because you are so right about pride. You put it perfectly into words and everything, though it made me laugh a few times, but it was great 5/5 keep it up!

I loved your poem, it's really original, and so well written. Somehow funny, but also deep and truthful.

I think the first stanza is something I can relate to in my very own way. Oh, and pride is something I can relate to more than I would want to.

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

I really like the subject matter of your poetry. Some of the rhyming sounds a bit stressed though. I'd love to read some prose from you.