I cried so many tears

by Michelle18   Jul 7, 2007


Sitting on my bed,
wondering how you are.
so many thoughts runnning through my head,
because you left my heart with a scar.
when you left for training,
i cried so many tears.
i hope our memories arent fading,
thats one of my biggest fears.
i pray to god every night,
that you wont forget about our love.
i sometimes imagine your face in sight,
because you're the one im always thinking of.
i just hope its a fact,
that you're safe and okay.
but until you come back,
i continue to cry every night and every day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    That was so sweet! i know the feeling when someone you love is away for awhile.
    loved it. amazing poem! 5/5 (:
    "Because you left my heart with a scar."
    favourite line!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    It seems like me and you are going through the same pain now, as my that special person left me as well, and ask me how is that pain, its no joke, it really hurt

    but another great poem by you,,,, you are truly so talented

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    HoW sweeT iS thiS poeM anD i loveD iT.

    luzaN

  • 17 years ago

    by Raven

    I can relate to about all your poems and trust me thats alot of poems lol.
    I love this one :)

    5/5

    ~Mz.Raven

    P.S anuther one im not sposed to comment lol, i dont thnk im going to be getting to the ones im supposed to be commenting for a long time because the ones im reading are so good

  • 17 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This is a really cute poem and i can actually kindof relate because im going to the NAVY soon and a lot of people are sad but my favorite lines were....:i pray to god every night,
    that you wont forget about our love.
    i sometimes imagine your face in site,
    because you're the one im always thinking of." Dont stop writting you are great at what you do and your only 15 thats really good....Thanks for commenting mine...!

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