You Are The One

by Mezmeryz   Jul 7, 2007


I guess you are the one that I was always looking for,
To show me friendship's not all happiness, to it there's more;
Where even smiles can be deceiving,
I can't believe what I was feeling;
All the love I had for you had made my heart go sore.

You took me to places where I didn't think we'd ever be,
So you know now why it was just so hard for me to see;
To notice it was all a lie,
To know you'd be the one to make me cry;
I thought you made me live, but you were one who was killing me.

I thought you'd be there to always wipe my tears away,
I thought you'd be the one making things right for me everyday;
But it seems like you're fed up of being kind,
And I was just too blind;
Now I know only god can make true all the things for which I pray.

I guess you are the one that I was always looking for,
To show me friendship's not all happiness, to it there's more;
Where even smiles can be deceiving,
I can't believe what I was feeling;
All the love I had for you had made my heart go sore.

*I understand why people think the flow is not smooth. i personally would think so too, if it were not meant to be more like a song. i had a tune/rhythm in my head whilst writing this poem. sorry if it is not fulfilling =]

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Wow huni, that bought tears to my eyes, anytime you need to talk i'm ere for you! always! xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Despite the fact that it didn't flow smoothly, I'd still give this work my props for its endearing message. It simply captivated me. I actually find it quite thoughtful of the person/subject to approach this situation rather sensibly by way of learning from such experience. Nicely penned, nonetheless. ~Marian.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem ,well written, and very long, wording was good , great job , keep it up, your firnd Tracy d,,,,, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Sweetie, this was a very beautiful poem.. thank you for asking me to read it ^.^ I really enjoyed it. Every line is filled with so much emotion, it's so sad but something I can definitely relate to.. I also love the way your poem is so neat and organized =P That definitely gives you a plus! Great job hun, please keep up the good work! I hope to read another wonderful piece from you soon! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 17 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    I liked it. i could definitely relate to just about every line!

    it just needs a little work...the flow is a little iffy... but none the less, good job!

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