Interesting.
:] In a good way.
A very emotional && powerful piece of poetry. The vocab was good. The flow was great && the rhyme scheme was different than usual. [Which is good.]

"I guess you are the one that I was always looking for,
To show me friendship's not all happiness, to it there's more;
Where even smiles can be deceiving,
I can't believe what I was feeling;
All the love I had for you had made my heart go sore."

^ Lovely job. :] 5.5 Keep writing.
- Steph <3

I liked it. i could definitely relate to just about every line!

it just needs a little work...the flow is a little iffy... but none the less, good job!

Sweetie, this was a very beautiful poem.. thank you for asking me to read it ^.^ I really enjoyed it. Every line is filled with so much emotion, it's so sad but something I can definitely relate to.. I also love the way your poem is so neat and organized =P That definitely gives you a plus! Great job hun, please keep up the good work! I hope to read another wonderful piece from you soon! 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Great poem ,well written, and very long, wording was good , great job , keep it up, your firnd Tracy d,,,,, 5/5

Despite the fact that it didn't flow smoothly, I'd still give this work my props for its endearing message. It simply captivated me. I actually find it quite thoughtful of the person/subject to approach this situation rather sensibly by way of learning from such experience. Nicely penned, nonetheless. ~Marian.

Wow huni, that bought tears to my eyes, anytime you need to talk i'm ere for you! always! xXx