Neo
What a sad yet beautiful piece you have penned.

I can feel your bliss and pain,
I know when you lose and gain.
I will forget you never,
Cause your heart beats in me forever...

What an awesome stanza. The emotions speak so strongly from these lines.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Beautiful write, even though sad, but you expressive them within beautiful emotions. The last stanza remain me somewhere for someone... Love realizes and accepts that there will be disagreements and disturbing emotions... There may be times when miles lay between, but love is a commitment. It believes, and endures all things. beautifully done!

Neo,
You have such a beautiful heart my friend. I think that's what makes your poems beautiful.
take care,
Marjan

Aww, such a sad poem! It is a beautiful one though. The part where you said her heart will foverer beat in yours really touched me. I have a special someone too and I feel exactly the same way about him, he will forever be deep inside my heart.

Keep writing!

5/5 Ingrid

Beautifully penned poem! ...the rhyme is nice.. I loved your style! 5/5..
...Melody..=)