by aDORKable x3 Jul 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As the snow fell that cold December night, |
Awe! I was like..eh, this isn't so great...but I read those last two lines and almost cried. That part was perfect; beautiful! |
by Bryan
This is a very good poem ciao, absolutely love the flow, the last 2 lines perfect, you know this is a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!! |
by XxTearDropxX
Your poem is an awesome poem! you desribe things so well! and you put so much emosion into it!!! i loved it!!! |