This is another great poem ciao, love the rhyme scheme, better than mine, flawless, i give it a 5/5, keep them coming babe!!!

I love this...beautiful message, strong emotions and deoth with flawless flow throughout and beautifully painted imagery.
Your poetry never fails to impress me =)

That the memories of you were dead.

The memories, they died in a second;
[[I hate when people use the same word twice in a stanza...]]

Hm. This isn't your best, but I did like it. The point was good and I loved the style you tried. It's unique.
Now, I really liked the ending, but the middle lagged. Keep the middle up; that's important too! =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5