This poem is so touching, I had tears in my eyes while I was reading it. So heart- breaking piece.
You created atmosphere full of pain and sadness.
-Angel of mercy born in hell
his whole life was taken away
was given to the devil himself
he's the one left to pay .-
^Excellently written stanza.
Whole poem has very good imagery, which only adds more sadness and depth to it.
5/5 from me

This poem is so sad, you again described emotions perfectly. Atmosphere is touching and great. Every stanza is incredibly written. This is one of your best poems. Well done 5/5

Your poem fills me with sadness. I admire your writing, please keep on posting.

Very very sad tears are running down my eyes child abuse should never happen if only they new it hurts a lifetime not just when it happens as well.5/5 Steve

Tracy
Wow. Excellent job! The raw emotion in this piece is awesome. Really hits you right in the heart.

Torn clothes and a shattered look
stands a little boy very distributed
being punished all the time
for things he didn't deserve.

The image this creates in the minds eye is heart breaking.
Take Care Cindy

This line brings tears to my eyes, wanting to hold him and let him know he will be safe from all this abuse! Great writing........friends always!

Little head down to the ground
and hides his face in shame
the swollen jaws and black eyes
and he accepts all the blame.

That's so touching and sad.