This is a beautiful poem and really brings a feeling of peace and contentment just reading it. You have really captured a mood here. Too often we are caught up in the struggle of society and overlook the things that truly matter. Excellent poem.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Again not a big fan of this type of poetry. but again it is a beautifully worded poem and so true in many ways.. keep iy up. 5/5

This is a beautiful poem. i love the way you capture nature's beauty and essence and put it down on paper. the flow was nice and it was well written.