Dont you remember

by Eternal   Jul 8, 2007


Don't you remember the promise?
You vowed me to be together
Tell me, don't you love me?
Or have you found another?

This is the suffering and pain
I receive for losing love
Because I trusted and loved
I have lost all my gains

Listen to me I will tell you
The heartbreaking story of love
O heart, are you going leaving me
For I gifted my heart and soul

After so much caressing in love
It is you who left me
Now tell me what happened?
Tell me don't you love me?

Eternal 08/07/2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is a gr8 poem..nicely put..but i think u should have made it longer..and it would have emphasisedjust dat lil bit more the meaning!..but overall a gr8 poem
    4/5
    bree tk care

  • 17 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Some of the wording confused me slightly but i like how you had several rhetorical questions. it helps get the reader to stop and ponder. well done xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very cute poem. flow is nice plus the simple but meaningful words. Keep writing and sharing more. tc

  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    Your poem tells me your full of questions, and I understand and I feel the emotion in your work, My boyfriend said goodbye to me to after we dated about a year and a half, this happened a month ago and I still feel the aching so I feel a bit of myself in your work

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