Comments : Dont you remember

  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    Your poem tells me your full of questions, and I understand and I feel the emotion in your work, My boyfriend said goodbye to me to after we dated about a year and a half, this happened a month ago and I still feel the aching so I feel a bit of myself in your work

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very cute poem. flow is nice plus the simple but meaningful words. Keep writing and sharing more. tc

  • 17 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Some of the wording confused me slightly but i like how you had several rhetorical questions. it helps get the reader to stop and ponder. well done xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is a gr8 poem..nicely put..but i think u should have made it longer..and it would have emphasisedjust dat lil bit more the meaning!..but overall a gr8 poem
    4/5
    bree tk care