by Aure
Your poem tells me your full of questions, and I understand and I feel the emotion in your work, My boyfriend said goodbye to me to after we dated about a year and a half, this happened a month ago and I still feel the aching so I feel a bit of myself in your work |
by Fsams
Very cute poem. flow is nice plus the simple but meaningful words. Keep writing and sharing more. tc |
Some of the wording confused me slightly but i like how you had several rhetorical questions. it helps get the reader to stop and ponder. well done xoxo |
This is a gr8 poem..nicely put..but i think u should have made it longer..and it would have emphasisedjust dat lil bit more the meaning!..but overall a gr8 poem |