WOW powerful poem, sad and very frightening sorry to hear of this , but well written and good flow, wording was great and you did a wonderful job of expressing your self, great job on the poem ,your friend Tracy d.... 5/5

I like this poem well put together and sad!!! sorry to hear that!!!! it has a nice floww!!!!
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Interesting poem. Enjoyed reading it. Keep it up your good work..

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Thats wonderful... i hope it didnt happen!!!! anyway 5/5

You have an amazing way with words. i really like the feeling that is obviously put in it. great job :) keep it up.

Man! man! man! Another good poem, obv have a good flow.. It's feel like 1940s, thinkin back in the years the way happen in that poem of yours. U r A-M-A-z-I-N-G!

Thanks for the comment hun.

I know how you exactly feel.
Boys just suck alot.
Yeah, there will be the time when it's our time to come back with vengeance ):

And you say you dont write poems. well this looks like a pretty awesome one to me!

Absolutely Fantastic!

Thank you for your comment. I really liked this poem you wrote. I felt like you were telling a story from my life. I love how i can relate to this. revenge is sweet. lol, anyway, i hope this never really happened to you. and even if it did, it sounds like you rose from the ashes and are doing better now. great job. 5/5