Hi corine thanks for the comment... anyway if i have time i will visit all you poems... thank you very much...

I love this poem !!!
Great work!

Really good poem, well written 5/5

Very powerful imagery. I really like how you put it together. it is very well written. great job

yours truly. polaroid

Very deep and philosophical. A pleasure to read.

Awwww wow! great peom =) ii can relate alott! =D keep it upp.

I read this a couple of times because there is so much there. So much between the lines, I kept thinking Before What? And then it occurred to me it would probably be before a lot of things, for such is life.
The ending was perfect for the content of the poem. outstanding job.

This was very good. once again your work is beautiful. its simple yet grabbed me completely into it. the last stanza was my fav. this is a poem alot of ppl will be able to relate to. it reminds me so much of myself. i loved it. incredible.

Very deep i love it

Good jpb 5/5

RIP johnny cash

niley truley done !

Very powerful grabs you from the start ...amazing write 10/5

I love this and i feel this same way. for whatever reason, people have to suffer heartbreak and sadness. that's how i relate to your poem. people can take this into so many differetn aspects of their own lives, an i think that's what's so great about this particular one. amazing job! :) would you please rrc my new one, "put to rest" and "find the cure"?