This also is a very sad poem tears run down my eyes i know your poems are all true and hopefully readers would think twice before hurting their loved ones it really is sad.5/5 Steve.

Tracy
This piece brought tears to my eyes. How sad. Imagery is great.

He drops to his knees begins to say
dear Lord in heaven please take me away.

These lines really touched me.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Excellent poem, it is full of emotions and sadness. Imagery is incredible and you wrote this one powerfully.
That people on earth can be so mean
because in heaven thats something he's never seen.
^that stanza is greatest. Well done 5/5

This poem is very sad and deep. Excellent choice of words adds great atmosphere to the whole piece. My favorite lines are:
-He asked for love and hate he received
it's so hard for the angel to believe.-
Great job, 5/5 from me

Wow, a very beautiful and heartfelt poem.

What a heart wrenching write!! Sad but true of a day...AGAIN! Nice write...