WOW...this one is absolutely great..sad yes,very sad,.. but beautifully written....i love, love , love it!!!.... AMAZING!!!... well done!Keep up the great work..5/5(for sure)....Your friend...*Melody*...:) |
Man! Man! Man! Damn! Damn! Damn! Damn! U r so f_**ing GOOOD! Sound like a story, written in beautiful, so sad but it's amazing and fantasic written, I read it 4 times and feel like I am that girl, knowing what she feel like. Man man man, this is going to be add on my fav poem forreal! U r so great!! |
by Poison Ivy
An Excellent Write!.I could visualize the story.Touched me deep within my soul. |
Wow, this was a really great poem. I loved it. It was deep and sad and... i just loved it. gave me chills. 5/5 |