Remember

by luv Shelbz luv   Jul 8, 2007


Remember that time
When we were young
And we got in trouble
After we had flung
That rock and you took the blame

Remember when we used to
Sit and watch the stars go by
We held hands and you kissed my cheek
I felt so good and touched your thigh
I didn't want the night to be through

Remember the time at school
When were best friends
And we would go down the halls
Thinking this would never end
And everyone thought that we were fools

I guess you don't remember these times
For you broke my heart like it was nothing
You didn't even check to see if I was ok
Why did you do this there has to be something
Well thoses times are over because out you chimed

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    It was a good poem.
    Very sweet.
    I give it a..
    hmm..
    5/5 sounds about right?
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Very sweet i loved it excelent writing it was very cute 5/5 for good flow and well written piece

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Hey nice work it was but i think honestly work on the ending abit but apart from that it was perfect :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Such a touching piece that was really sweet and I found the emotion to be heartbraking. To me this was also like a little story which is enjoyable in its own way. A good effot was put into this. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a wonderful poem. Straight to the point. It flowed nicely too, well done.

    Remember when we used to
    Sit and watch the stars go by
    ^^I really adore this two lines

    (I) felt so good and touched your thigh
    I think you mean 'it'

    Sorry if I'm wrong.

    Keep up the good work!

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