I love that Lizzy.
I hadn't read an optimistic poem in ages :)
Thank You For Sharing This!

Marjan

Ms. Lizzy,
This is a great poem, Lizzy :D. I agree with the person that commented before, that it's been a while since an optimistic poem has crossed my path. The topic you chose seems to work well with your style of writing.
The flow was very good as well. Short, but full of meaning.
Keep it up, 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist and seahorse

P.S. If you get a chance, could you read one of my poems? Thanks

I like the meaning of the poem and especially the rymhming :D