Very nice! 5/5 I agree with Serendib!

This is avery nice Cinquain with great imagery

This was a very funny poem. Not be rude or anything. But, I thought very fun to read. I guess it's cause I can relate to it. But with other things regarding your poem's structure... it was very well done. But how can it not be ms.Writer? You spoke in truth what fish really are, and I am glad that they have finally been recognized in this society. We could not have been alive today without them after all! Great job!!!

I like the structure of this poem, well done! To be honest I really don't like short poems X_X but this one is really good.

I never thought anyone would write a cinquain about fish lol... i wrote one too just the other night..

its really niice... very niice :)

Aveena*