by JRS
How sweet... |
Oh my god. thats all i can say. my boyfriend is going to join the army in three years and...well...honestly, im scared for him. and i admire that he can go and do that. but i also want him to remember, that i will always love him. id like to recomend this to my boyfriend, please let me know if that is ok. also, im adding you to my favorites. |
by Fsams
Excellent and I am sure this would mean a great encouragement for the dependant. Very nice for sure and I owe 5/5 :) |
by X2892
I really loved this poem 2 great work, 5/5 |
I really like this poem. It touches home with me becuase I am in the Army and stationed in Germany right now. I hope ya'll get to be together again soon! xxx |
by Mousie
Aww that was so sweet, it must be really hard having him gone. wonderful job, great flow and great rhyming and just an overall good poem. |
by Curry
I rated this one a 4. i dont like it as much as the others but its still good! |
by Boy
That was suchy a nice poem. i loved this poem. you realy know the meaning of true love |
I wish you and him the best of luck |
by Nix
Interesting poem. It is not unique and it is little pathetic but it is greatly written. I don't like ending but atmosphere that you created is excellent. 5/5 |
I liked the poem, could relate to it a lot :) |
by Marc Ortiz
I find it really sweet.. Especially the last line =) good job. You have some minor errors.. Just capitalize all the I's. ^_^ |
Wow this was a really sweet poem! and it was nicely written nice job 5/5 |
by TheRapture03
That was really good. You used alot of strong word, and it had a good flow. It sounds ilke this person meant alot to you. Anyways, keep it up. |
by Alexa Eudis
Thats really good. vivid emotion gives it that much mroe of an impact |
by noha
Waw u r so great , so much feeling, nice work |
Awww. again i know how it feels. |